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Saturday, 17 May 2014

Comercial: Grammar Hair Spray Ad

Hair Spray: Less frizz more whizz



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In her room, Sarah, the big headed perfectionist, struggled to get ready. With her hair flat and frizzy, looking like a birds nest, she starts to panic. Within an hour, over fifty guests would enter her home, a wonderful place known to host the grandest parties.

Sarah, the damsel in distress, on her brown embroidered chair helplessly rummages through her dresser. Scavenging through the piles of hair ties and headbands she weeps, her heart sinking knowing that she will never be ready in time. Her hands quaking in the air, as Sarah screams for help.


Walking into the room Sarah’s mom, worried and agitated with curls in her hair, tramples in. She comes in holding a bottle, pink and bright. Beside the many combs and hair accessories Sarah’s mom lays down the precious bottle, leaving the room.


Below her wet, tear dripped arms, her eyes catch a glimpse of a pink bottle, she sits up holding the beauty product as she reads: “ Less frizz more wizz, in this small bottle, for travel ready use, lies an unbelievable result. For shine and volume, spray this for every do!”


Sarah, the new and improved, frantically sprays the hair product between the nooks and a crannies of her split ends and roots. Confident, going down the stairs and strutting through the hallway, her smile radiant, she is ready to party!


For parties
For dances
For dates
Use the less frizz more whizz hair spray for shine and volume on every do!

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